Poem -
Riled
Getting riled up about little thing's
is so fun, you get to vent
and pour your mind
into creative avenues
like streams of streaming
scenes behind you
kaleidoscopic eyes
and allow others in side
a life that only you could dream,
even when those sights,
sometimes frightening, like
lightening a dim lit room
as a child, you see dark unfold,
and you see yourself holding
the power to tell a story was
beheld in your expanding
swelling world
Like 1 Pin it 0
Support CosmoFunnel.com
You can help support the upkeep of CosmoFunnel.com via PayPal.
Comments
Hey TEKNOIC!! ...this is VERY creative!!...... it has such powerful phrasing that I wish you would have broke your lines differently...... making the formatting show them off......... please don't take that as a criticism.... because poetry has its own license ......just a suggestion.... for what I consider to be a most excellent write........ALL STARS!!...... and..... WELCOME to COSMO!!...... in case no one has said so........ LOVE and ROCKETS!!........T xo. ?
Thanks and I will consider your application
Thanks a ton