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Tony Taylor

Hey ANNA!!......I can feel the pain of this in its core....but I have to elude to the 'most excellent' use of word choices bouncing off of one another so musically......enhancing the intent of the write and bringing to light the idea of 'chronic pain' most poetically!!.....ALL STARS!!.....haven't read you before ......looking forward to more ......LOVE & ROCKETS!!.....T xo ????

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Good bye Larry

Thank you very much Tony ?
This is an excellent site
There is more poetry on my page. 
Cheers Anna ☺ 

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