Riptides Asunder
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Is it nobler in the mind to allow myself to feel this sensation, do I hastily torment my senses for the sake of the touch?
Ā Let the riptides take me asunder or breach the twilight as an intermittent mist crashing upon the shores of torment inside my own demented serenityā¦
Ā The truth glistens in spite of the limelight to holdfast and hold tight to the dying of the bright,Ā
the deep dark encompassing the shimmer of my sliver of simplicity, my form bent in ruthless gaze at the storm sent to sit upon my shine, entombed in my shrine until its blood lets. May the dust settle in the sunset. So let it beā¦
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Hello Joshua...
I'm going to come to you if I get stuck on a Title ok?
WOW!
Great write!
Thank you for sharing...
sparrowsong
š thank you! Come to me anytime my door is always open. I appreciate you guys feedbackĀ
Hey mate, saw this one today and I had to comment. Something beautiful in this muse. Very clever poetry indeed. Haven't seen you on Cosmo before, intriguing!
Thank you! I havenāt been on in years but trying to shake off the rust. I hope you enjoy as much as do writing them šš