Poem -

Rise

Everything in life is meant to teach you lessons and lead you to one final direction.

Without correction we'll be lost.

 Words can be effective positively or can be destructive.

Choose them and define them wisely.

How we live and what we give can be look upon and judged highly.

Sometimes the world I live in feels like I don't fit in.

Am I losing or am I winning or is this just the beginning of a dream or an illusion.

To much nonsense and confusion.

I'm done running and making excuses, it's time to step up and get up and diffuse this.

How others view this can be useful or useless depending how they use this.

How we use our words and what we do with them can be powerful if we know how to use it and don't abuse it.

It's amusing how we keep accusing the past while we try to live the life that we have.

To evolve sometimes we need to fight against all odds to finally stand tall and rise above!

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Tony Taylor

Amen to that ELLIOT!!......positivity is definitely the correct path when one is on the path learning to "RISE"......a strong piece of poetic prose here my friend !!......ALL STARS!!..... well done!.....LOVE & ROCKETS!!......T xo ??✴✴❤✴✴?

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Elliot Garcia

As always thanks Tony!...it' great to know people out there can relate to my poetry n that are going thru the same..I'm always happy to write knowing I make a difference thru it. Thanks again for your feedback?

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