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Rivers of repentance and redemption part 1.

Rivers of repentance and redemption part 1.

As she desperately gasped for the final breath of her sunken demise, she noticed the beauty of the sunshine as it glimmered on the surface.

Relaxing her panic stricken struggle for air as it peirced though the shadows of her watery grave elegantly encasing her in golden ray's of divine light as her soul slipped away from her lifeless body. 

The waves brushed sweetly upon the shore as her heartbroken spirit rose up from the murky depths. 

Tears of remorse dripping down her cheeks, she grasped onto the hand held out from the heavens as she whispered softly 

SAVE ME.

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SoulWhispers

The ending of this piece, brings forth such peace & serenity.  It wraps it all up so beautifully. 

Lovely ink. 

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