" Rooftop Awareness "
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If I consider from this rooftop, the heightened perspective
It may seem a dissimilar understanding of the smallness of men
For, in passing on the street below, men appear great in their arrogance
Mingled with pomp and circumstance, their glorious façade buckles
Beneath the weight of the baggage they carry, from unforgivable crimes
That dance on their future graves, with youthful innocence
For the shadows they see appear grim and blameless when there's always
Another side to all things considered irreparable in the eyes of God
But who says you have to live there, but you DO have to learn to love
For under the auspices of the trinity, you can be anything you wanna be
And I sincerely hope that this clarity, from this rooftop enlightens me
Then encourages my understanding of this heightened perspective
And this abiding rooftop awareness....
Tony Taylor (Chicago)
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Great write, my applause. My vote
WILLIAMSJI MAVELI
Thank you Mr. Maveli..............much appreciated..............t xx
"It may seem a dissimilar understanding of the smallness of men
For, in passing on the street below, men appear great in their arrogance
Mingled with pomp and circumstance, their glorious façade buckles
Beneath the weight of the baggage they carry, from unforgivable crimes
That dance on their future graves, with youthful innocence
For the shadows they see appear grim and blameless when there's always
Another side to all things considered irreparable in the eyes of God"
loving your word flow here little bro, especially these lines
"Beneath the weight of the baggage they carry, from unforgivable crimes
That dance on their future graves, with youthful innocence"
love ya , your big sis nardine xoxo
You're so cool Nardine........I can NEVER tell what you're gonna comment on........love that!!......smiles.......your little bro..........T xx
Surprise, surprise hehehe, love ya xoxo
I can just imagine right now little skeletons dancing in a cemetery, yep that is my weird mind for ya xoxo
Actually, Big Sis.....that image works quite well for me.........should have put in the poem somewhere..(lol!)......you have the mind of a film director!!...........love ya Nardine!!.......smiles......T xx