THE ROSE & THE THORN

Going back to the beginning
Where it all had started out
From the first time that he saw her
His love was not in doubt
He’d spied her in a cafe
Across the way from where he worked
Like a flower from God’s garden
No attending, had he shirked
This girl she was his beauty
A rose; and he the thorn
He looked at her with loving eyes
But she at him with scorn
He tried so very hard
To make her love him as he did
Sent her flowers to her work
Even helped her watch her kid
But this woman she resented him
Said he crowded up her space
Wanted to be left alone
“Back off from in her face!”
How could she be so heartless
After all he gave to her
Sent her letters every day
His emotions she would stir
Play him off like he was foolish
Said she didn’t want him there
But whenever she did see him
He would see her beckoning stare
This woman was a player
And a Mother, too to boot!
How could she act so brazen?
Such a tart; hot in pursuit
She rebuffed all his attention
But she flirted with her peers
He told her she should stop this
Made him mad; played on his fears
Cos he worried that he’d lose her
Though she wasn’t his to lose
His advances were not welcome
She never chose to be his muse
It was bad enough she suffered
His deluded, crazy mind
But to see her young son suffer
Was a step too far; unkind
The photography he crafted
Through the curtains of her home
She could never shut him out
Would never leave this girl alone
How could she be ungrateful?
Was this all the thanks he’d get!
Admiration for her beauty
Before they even met
No amount of hidden messages
Notes pushed through her front door
Would help him with this thankless task
He couldn’t take much more
He had to know her feelings
There was no longer a choice
A love this deep within his loins
She must now hear his voice
So a visit he did pay
To this woman in her home
Made her love him just as he loved her
No longer would she roam
Released from all his suffering
His sickened mind was now reborn
The rose plucked from God’s garden
Was now an ugly thorn ....
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Your storytelling is WORLD CLASS Clair, congratulations on another great poem/story :)
Thanks Jason, what a lovely comment!!
Clair...great write! Â Dramatic...told well to the brutal end! Â val
Thanks Val, appreciate you reading!!