Poem -
Roses
Roses seem to turn blue as
fast as the day run's from you
The petals you leave behind
enters in this heart of mine
When the wind blows from the east
and the sun rises from the west
All I could smell are the sweet
petals you left behind
And when we sit at night watching
the star's shine so bright
I wish I could tell youΒ
that I love you
So roses seem to turn blue as
fast as the day runs from you
The petals that you leave behind
enters this lonely heart of mine
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Comments
Hello Matthew...
Very sweet write to your love...
Thank you for sharing...
Hugs...
sparrowsongΒ
Thank you I wrote that in sixth grade
Thank you I wrote that poem in the sixth gradeΒ
beautiful pen Matthew. Welcome to Cosmo!
Thank you writing is my passion and I want to be a writer so I post some of the things I wrote to see what people think I have a fear that people might not like them I have like 100 poems I wrote from the 6th grade on
You won't find any negative feedback here Matthew. the people of Cosmo will encourage your gift of writing. Post as many as you want I will come and read them. just stop by to read mine in kind. that way I know you have a new one postedΒ :)
That's good to know I have three others on here that I wrote when will death come unmarked grave and everlasting sleep
I would lost that if I was asked...
I didn't know 6th grade boys wrote things like that...
The closest things I have saw anything boys did on paper was draw...
Spaceships, aliens and funny faces...
I thought it was sweet...
No I love writing poems drawing was not my thing my passion is to be a writer