Ruby Red Bliss
Silky ruby strands strewed upon her gentle breast,
Moonlight illuminates the sculpted goddess, configured in perfections best;
Closed lids as she takes a deep gasp,
Grasping my hand with writhe to slump back, reveling in the moments passed,
Frigid starry-night air filling her elegant chest,
Breathing sighs of carbon relief; she musters the most infectious laugh,
Divine energy flowing,
Bursting through the tides of her ocean;
I'm splashed with warmth and saturated in ecstasy,
Delving into her physique, fancifully, I seek;
Dreamlike, in its waking realm; I've perceived.
An abyss of eternal glory sparkles within her; luminous beyond belief
Yet beyond the eye can justify; thou true beauty conceived.
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This was a free verse poem. I thoroughly hope you enjoyed!
Hey SAGE!!.....I love the short 'A' vowel maintained throughout most of this piece......VERY poetic!!.... and the fact that you accomplished this with a poetic prose that has a subtle inherent rhyme running throughout is even MORE impressive!!..... but.....I was let down a bit by the final line..... regardless..... a stellar write.......ALL STARS!!....... well done!!......LOVE and ROCKETS!!......T xo ?✳☀?
The final line I felt to be rather generic as well, but that's where my other pieces pick up where this lacks. ;) THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR SUCH A THOUGHTFUL RESPONSE, I just gave you a follow and am looking forward to reading your work!