Poem -
Run across the tracks
One lite exterior
Jagged edges sanding
Paint the back door
Think about nuclear Iran
Eat chips to death
Feel pain in left scrotum
Laugh like a kookaburra
March with the penguins
Read the stupid paper
Can't get online
Phone a friend
Hang up
Head towards the station
Run across the tracks
DIE
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Comments
I knew I would like it as soon as I saw the title!
you are quite amazing!
there is something about the title, it conveys wreckless decisions? tempting fate? careless life?...
love to hear your thoughts on this write! perhaps if you have an extra second!
thanks again jai
I respect your reading talent
your poetry is hot
so you want my thoughts
I kid you not
The scream would have been the pic
It captures it all
by the train track I fell
after I heard God's call
It's a dark place ask anyone after
suicide attempt...
Live every moment as though last
luv Jai :)
I understand!
jai, accept my words as true my friend, I admire you, there is a beautiful heart displayed in your work!
like fine metals purified by fire, so our hearts delve into the troubles and trials of life.
I wish you well friend!
it's a pleasure to meet you in
the Cosmo; thank you.
serious bit of poetry here...am i wrong? now im not familar with kookaburra ...bird? but is this about the state of war ? march with the penguins.... ooh this one is very speculative . very well worded ,interesting .trying to figure you out jai lol tina x
giv you a nom because thats what good poetry is ! tina x
thank you Tina
kookaburra is Australian bird
you can't figure out a poet
It is under lock and key
but you can try
if you have lifespan over two hundred years
Poetry is a joy
and I am grateful to know it a bit
truth is out there somewhere
i am assured by your comments
that there is a sweet earth after all
So very much apprec
may we all meet one day
in the great book in the sky
Luv Jai :)
hope we are both in that book jai lol your right ,no-one can figure a good poet out cause thats how its supposed to be :)
to my friend jai
who wishes to meet in the sky
one day we will see
what he means to me
poet with meaning
true feelings in him
keeps us all in there
he has the power! within
keep on rising
be who you are
be jai
one very good star
My agreement is with Stephen in every aspect of his response. You truly are unique and awesome
poetry is a living art
We are it's undertakers
the Internet poets can breathe life
and contribute
thank you Random Enigma for
your support of Internet poetry
In the great Cosmo, we all do out
bit in a 5 billion year old home
we are very old beings except
for my 21 yo mother!
Thank you Susan; a kookaburra is a
native Australian Bird
intriguing by appearance but it
is the laughing sound it makes
which is its oddest feature
namaste Susan :)
thank you Susan for beautiful feelings
expressed on the Cosmo website
your words have the ability to impart life
into cyberspace as they call it, thereby transforming
it into beauty, poetry is fun is it not?
It is like looking into a green garden
watching nature unfold...
see you in the Cosmo!