ᴊᴜsᴛ ᴀ ᴘᴜᴢᴢʟᴇ ᴏғ ᴍʏ ᴛʜᴏᴜɢʜᴛs
𝗄𝗂𝗇𝖽𝖺 𝗌𝖼𝗋𝖺𝗉😳😳
𝐓𝐡𝐞 𝐬𝐞𝐚 𝐢𝐬 𝐚𝐥𝐫𝐞𝐚𝐝𝐲 𝐜𝐨𝐥𝐝,
𝐭𝐡𝐞 𝐬𝐚𝐧𝐝 𝐬𝐭𝐢𝐜𝐤𝐬 𝐭𝐨 𝐦𝐲 𝐬𝐤𝐢𝐧 𝐚𝐬 𝐢𝐟 𝐢 𝐰𝐞𝐫𝐞 𝐭𝐡𝐞 𝐚𝐧𝐬𝐰𝐞𝐫 𝐭𝐨 𝐭𝐡𝐞 𝐪𝐮𝐞𝐬𝐭𝐢𝐨𝐧 "𝐢𝐧 𝐭𝐡𝐞 𝐞𝐧𝐝 𝐰𝐡𝐲?".
𝐌𝐲 𝐡𝐞𝐚𝐫𝐭 𝐥𝐨𝐬𝐞𝐬 𝐛𝐞𝐚𝐭𝐬 𝐚𝐥𝐰𝐚𝐲𝐬 𝐬𝐨 𝐬𝐚𝐥𝐭𝐲 𝐭𝐡𝐭 𝐭𝐡𝐞𝐲 𝐧𝐨 𝐥𝐨𝐧𝐠𝐞𝐫 𝐭𝐚𝐬𝐭𝐞.
𝐓𝐡𝐞 𝐬𝐭𝐚𝐫𝐬 𝐮𝐬𝐞𝐬 𝐭𝐡𝐞 𝐟𝐨𝐚𝐦 𝐭𝐡𝐭 𝐭𝐡𝐞 𝐰𝐚𝐯𝐞𝐬 𝐜𝐚𝐫𝐫𝐲 𝐨𝐧 𝐭𝐡𝐞 𝐫𝐨𝐜𝐤𝐬 𝐚𝐬 𝐚 𝐛𝐫𝐮𝐬𝐡..
𝐭𝐨 𝐜𝐨𝐥𝐨𝐫 𝐚𝐥𝐥 𝐨𝐯𝐞𝐫 𝐭𝐡𝐞 𝐬𝐤𝐲 𝐰𝐢𝐭𝐡,
𝐭𝐡𝐞 𝐩𝐚𝐥𝐞𝐭𝐭𝐞 𝐨𝐟 𝐦𝐲 𝐩𝐚𝐬𝐭.
𝐀𝐥𝐥 𝐭𝐡𝐨𝐬𝐞 𝐦𝐨𝐦𝐞𝐧𝐭𝐬 𝐰𝐡𝐞𝐫𝐞 𝐢 𝐰𝐚𝐧𝐭𝐞𝐝 𝐭𝐨 𝐛𝐞 𝐬𝐮𝐜𝐤𝐞𝐝 𝐢𝐧 𝐚 𝐯𝐨𝐫𝐭𝐞𝐱,𝐛𝐮𝐭
𝐢 𝐞𝐧𝐝𝐞𝐝 𝐮𝐩 𝐧𝐨𝐝𝐝𝐢𝐧𝐠 𝐧 𝐬𝐭𝐚𝐲𝐢𝐧𝐠 𝐢𝐧 𝐚 𝐜𝐨𝐫𝐧𝐞𝐫.
𝐀𝐥𝐥 𝐭𝐡𝐨𝐬𝐞 𝐦𝐨𝐦𝐞𝐧𝐭𝐬 𝐰𝐡𝐞𝐫𝐞 𝐦𝐲 𝐧𝐚𝐦𝐞 𝐬𝐡𝐨𝐮𝐭𝐞𝐝 𝐛𝐲 𝐩𝐩𝐥 𝐞𝐜𝐡𝐨𝐞𝐝 𝐢𝐧 𝐦𝐲 𝐡𝐞𝐚𝐝 𝐛𝐮𝐭 𝐢 𝐚𝐥𝐫𝐞𝐚𝐝𝐲 𝐛𝐞𝐜𝐚𝐦𝐞 𝐝𝐞𝐚𝐟.
𝐀𝐥𝐥 𝐭𝐡𝐨𝐬𝐞 𝐦𝐨𝐦𝐞𝐧𝐭𝐬 𝐰𝐡𝐞𝐫𝐞 𝐭𝐡𝐞 𝐬𝐢𝐥𝐞𝐧𝐜𝐞 𝐰𝐚𝐬 𝐦𝐨𝐫𝐞 𝐞𝐱𝐩𝐞𝐧𝐬𝐢𝐯𝐞 𝐭𝐡𝐚𝐧 1000 𝐭𝐞𝐚𝐫𝐬.
𝘛𝘩𝘦𝘺 𝘢𝘳𝘦 𝘢𝘭𝘭 𝘶𝘱 𝘵𝘩𝘦𝘳𝘦 𝘴𝘩𝘪𝘯𝘪𝘯𝘨 𝘢𝘴 𝘪𝘧 𝘵𝘩𝘦𝘺 𝘯𝘦𝘷𝘦𝘳 𝘸𝘦𝘳𝘦 𝘢 𝘱𝘢𝘳𝘵 𝘰𝘧 𝘮𝘦.
𝘐 𝘵𝘳𝘺 𝘵𝘰 𝘨𝘳𝘢𝘣 𝘵𝘩𝘦𝘮 𝘸𝘪𝘵𝘩 𝘮𝘺 𝘩𝘢𝘯𝘥 𝘣𝘶𝘵 𝘵𝘩𝘦𝘺 𝘢𝘳𝘦 𝘵𝘰𝘰 𝘣𝘪𝘨,𝘢𝘯𝘥 𝘪'𝘮 𝘴𝘰 𝘴𝘮𝘢𝘭𝘭..
𝘐 𝘢𝘭𝘮𝘰𝘴𝘵 𝘮𝘪𝘴𝘴 𝘵𝘩𝘦𝘮...
𝘐 𝘱𝘭𝘶𝘯𝘨𝘦 𝘮𝘺 𝘩𝘦𝘢𝘥 𝘣𝘢𝘤𝘬 𝘪𝘯𝘵𝘰 𝘵𝘩𝘦 𝘸𝘢𝘵𝘦𝘳 𝘵𝘰 𝘴𝘦𝘢𝘳𝘤𝘩 𝘴𝘰𝘮𝘦𝘵𝘩𝘪𝘯𝘨..𝘵𝘩𝘵 𝘱𝘢𝘪𝘯,
𝘵𝘰 𝘵𝘳𝘺 𝘵𝘰 𝘧𝘪𝘯𝘥 𝘢𝘨𝘢𝘪𝘯 𝘵𝘩𝘵 𝘨𝘪𝘢𝘯𝘵,
𝘸𝘩𝘰 𝘴𝘵𝘦𝘱𝘱𝘦𝘥 𝘰𝘯 𝘮𝘦 𝘣𝘳𝘦𝘢𝘬𝘪𝘯𝘨 𝘢𝘭𝘭 𝘮𝘺 𝘣𝘰𝘯𝘦𝘴..
𝙤𝙣𝙡𝙮 𝙬𝙝𝙚𝙣 𝙞𝙩 𝙬𝙖𝙨 𝙩𝙤𝙤 𝙡𝙖𝙩𝙚 𝙞 𝙪𝙣𝙙𝙚𝙧𝙨𝙩𝙤𝙤𝙙 𝙩𝙝𝙩 𝙝𝙚 𝙙𝙞𝙙 𝙞𝙩..
𝙩𝙤 𝗱𝗶𝘀𝘁𝗿𝗮𝗰𝘁 𝗺𝗲..𝘁𝗼 𝗽𝗿𝗼𝘁𝗲𝗰𝘁 𝗺𝗲,
𝗳𝗿𝗼𝗺 𝘁𝗵𝗲 𝗿𝗲𝗮𝗹 𝗺𝗼𝗻𝘀𝘁𝗲𝗿..𝘁𝗵𝘁 𝗶 𝘄𝗮𝘀 𝗺𝘆𝘀𝗲𝗹𝗳.
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What an utterly beautiful poem. Wow, this one really caught me off guard. I think I need to take some time to find every hidden meaning and intricacy. Perhaps a private message swimming your way. Shines self reflection in a powerful way
OMGGGGG THANK YOU SOOOOO MUCHHH🥺🥺🥺🥺BEST COMMENT I HAVE EVER RECEIVED!!!! I REALLY REALLY APPRECIATE IT!!!! N I WANNA EXPLAIN TO YOU EVERY MEANING BUT IDK HOW.. IT'S SOOOO COMPLICATED,MAYBE IT HAS NO SENSE FOR OTHER PPL BUT IN MY MIND IT HAS ONE!!! N YES THIS POEM HAS A PRIVATE MESSAGE!!!! YOU CAN TRY TO GIVE IT A MEANING BASED ON YOUR LIFE'S PERSPECTIVE,PERSONAL EXPERIENCES..TRY TO FIND A BIT OF YOU IN THIS POEM N MAKE IT YOURS!!!
Ahhh I'm glad! It's what us fellow poets are here for, to share and comment on the Cosmos. Thank you Sara, I think you remined me of what poetry is all about, to spread our private messages, our hidden meanings, leaving them to the interpretation of others. I think I need to go an grab a pen now. I can feel the inspiration coming~
“The palette of my past” such beautiful imagery. This is a deeply cantered write. I sense much reflection and contemplation on your inner self. When we focus on our inner core, and outward projection, we can give rise to the realisation that we are our own worse enemy. I loved the end where you wake to the acceptance that the monster lies within. Something I can relate to myself. This entire piece oozes a wanting to connect with what is greater than our selves. To find peace from the past troubles and losses. I could go on. Pinned 📌 because this is a write a reader can come back to several times and reflect on. Wonderfully penned x
This is an awesome poem. I love the beach analogy. Keep writing xoxo:)