Poem -
Sacred Connection
Like 5 Pin it 2They all watch the clockĀ
Because you tickĀ
And I tockĀGive me a shotĀ
One last what ?ĀFinal dance in the flamesĀ
Darkness enrageĀ
Envious the gameĀ
They invest our painĀDuality intermittent
Intentions inquisition
All was unwrittenāāāāāā
In midst of all that's goneĀ
That's when we truly become oneĀ
A singular starĀ
Kissing the morning sun
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Comments
Sadly, very muchly enjoyed Tom, and an honour to be the first to test your ink .. and glad to say you passed with flying colours sir .. Oh' n welcome to Cosmo :)
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Thank you . I really appreciate you sharing that it resonates with yourself. I absolutely love this space to share my feelings and thoughts . I've hid for a long time .
Hey, you are more than welcome, my pleasure entirely. Neville
I like your prose Tom. It's a great place to express your thoughts and feelings. Hmm is this one worth a follow? I think so!
Just read a few of yours šš»I really appreciate those words they mean a lot .
Really excellent write Tom, hope to read much more from.you...x
Thank you š I appreciate your time and words .Ā
Glad you enjoyed it and hopefully you'll enjoy more as they come šš»š
Hello Thomas, welcome to cosmo. You have captured that transformation between two beautifully well here. I love the pace I feel as I read this. Your pinnacle line is beautifully wordedĀ
Gwen x
Thank you for such a warm welcome and some feedback. Much appreciated x
Youāre very welcome. I look forward to reading more of your poems š x Ā