" SALINDARHA ~ SHADOW WARRIOR "

With one last, mighty exertion, she thrust herself upward, reared back with no inhibitions
She moved through night like a glove on the hand of her sword gleaming like a premonition
She sheathed her Revenge, to conceal her position....
The swift blast of heat almost snuffed out her awareness of being alone
She heard a distant wailing, it took only a moment to realize the voice was her own
Through years and years they learned weaponry's training and magical precision
Salindarha was from a race where blindness was quite prevalent amongst it's women
Consequently all of their other senses were distinctive, and extremely advanced
So sensing the heat from below she became shadow, andย she began to dance
Along the edge of the volcano and with the stealth of a feather she began to descend
And sizing up the numbers below she began planning her cunningย attack
The twenty three savages below, had just wounded and raped seven of her friends
Salindarha had been away from their dwellings practicing with her sword "REVENGE"
It had been foretold:
That a woman warrior from her race would one day gain sight and wield the sword
To protect the blind women of the tribe ~ she had just gained her sight the night before
Now, with all of her skills and her sight, she held "Revenge" in her hands
And as wrath began boiling over in her ~ in an instant ~ she had a plan
She could smell the stink of heathen-death upon them as she moved through shadow
They could not see her around their camp, a skill she had long-ago mastered
In one swift motion "Revenge" was out of it's sheath, and set ablaze
Moving with the powerful wind, of a helicopter blade
She was so fast, that the savage's stood stunned
As heads began dropping like leaves, one-by-one
And with bodies still standing, blood spurting like fountains from their necks
The sword bright with blood, in moments, all were dead
Except for seven savages, who stood bleeding
And completely amazed....
She came to an abrupt halt, just in front of them as they began slowly backing away
She asked loudly, with her green eyes ablaze, "Any last words to say?"
But before they could utter a word, they were slashed through their cocks and legs
She screamed, "I'm waiting for you ALL to beg!"
For her seven sisters had been raped, and now she would take home their genitals
To be placed on display
And instead of ending their lives, she just left them writhing in pain
She licked the blood from "REVENGE"
And with their cocks in her hands
Just like the shadows
She slowly
Faded away....
Tony Taylorย ย (Chicago)
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Yo T you have such attention for detail with these qrites it is such an incredible read like poetry meets comics. Ive always liked the strong warrior women perceived in the movies but you got something special herd T the gore and brutalness of this warrior woman is sick man great job well done my brother i look forward to the rest of series.
YAY!!ย ย D!!........thanx brother!!..........I was hoping you'd say something like that..........it's these kinds of opinions that matter most to me..........other writers ~ gritting it out every day.........knowing the ins and outs of what it takes..........can't tell you how much these opinions mean to me.........maybe some day right?..........thanx again my friend!!............tyyl............T xo
T, ive noticed on here these comments is what everyone needs we all thrive on one anothers words and inspire each other it is a grand machine this cosmofunnel that continues to run on such high positivity, and everyone I have encountered on here are such good people.
Hey D!!......you're absolutely right.........and you're one of the big reasons for keeping the positivity going..........when you were gone for a short while..........it was obvious that you were missing.........almost time for you to be AOM I would think!!...........thanx for this brother!!...........later...........T xo
Dude im floored by this comment, that is one of the nicest things anyone has ever said on here, I really feel accepted and I would be Honored to be AOM. Thanks T you've made my day brother.
You know, I am so envious of your ability to write about such things. I write from experience which I find rather easy, because your casting your line into your memory, but to write about a she-warrior..simply amazing and with such fluidity. This was really entrancing I couldn't stop reading, I could've read and read. As always, I love to read your work, 5 stars from me.ย
Regards
Kind__
Hey Arthur!!.........I guess you hear it this a lot but.........you're too KIND!!..........I always appreciate such positive feedback.........but I feel like I must say that if you're writing from experience...........then you're doing exactly what it takes to write a She-Warrior type write..........I mean all it really is ~ is a little imagination poured on top of your own experiences..........when I was kid I read a LOT of comic books.........see what I mean!?.............good lookin' out brother!!............Love and Rockets!!.........T xo
T I love this with every fibre of my soul....hey man you boldly go where most mortal men would not even consider going; this one reads graphic playful intense and in some way 'erotic'....gloriously entertaining and completely suspended my disbelief....I wanted it to go on longer; and that ALMOST NEVER ย is a wish of this reader....congratulations on turning this into a graphic novel series...the artwork is captivating by the way.... all around time well spent....hey where can I pick up a copy? ย This is the ultimate definition of a fun read my friend....big love for this....are we still pinning? ย a definite pin for me if we are.... ttylย ย ย
'ย She licked the blood from "REVENGE"
And with their cocks in her hands
Just like the shadows
She slowly
Faded away....'
Awesome Mamma Jamma!!........I was hoping you'd approve........because this whole thing started because of your comment to me on "The Winter Warrior" write I did..........by the way, I hope I didn't mislead you in message..........this artwork here is NOT John K Snyders work.........it is only there to help get the idea across.........although he has already agreed to do the artwork for the series........along with a few other artists from his crew.......and I dare say it will be BETTER than this picture.........he is amazing & very well respected in the world of comic book art............his picture will emphasize the SHADOW WARRIOR aspect with the swordย ablaze when she wields it..........this is the final edit on this one and I'm so friggin' stoked you liked it bro...........I'm almost done..........and when the book is done i'll send you one..........for some reason I've been writing my ass off lately........my blog.........and finished the outline for my book.........anyway, thanx for this and I won't forget where the inspiration for this series came from brother..........when that day comes.........I'll find you & we'll hoist a few............Love and Rockets!!.........T xo