Poem -
Salvation
Alone,
In my room
Time
Drips slowly
Down
Into my asinine
remembering
and so
I write
To color my soul
that I might
Breathe
again
Alone as I ponder
The genius
Of
Salvador Dali
Alone
in my room......
T. Taylor (Chicago)
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Comments
Time
Drips slowly
Down
Into my asinine
remembering
Fantastic !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Salvador Dali Painting brother.........thanx so much Mark!!.............Love and Rockets!!..........T xo
" I write to colour my soul ! " That will do nicely !!!
Great !
Best wishes. Hug !
:)
Thank you Sir Richard!!........you're the best !!...........hugs-n-smiles............T xo
:) !!!
Take care.
Big fan of Salvador Dali. And a big fan of the a Tone. An equal genius.
Kimmy ~ you're kidding right!!??........I Mean Dali??........NO ONE is an equal genius to Salvo!!.......but I appreciate you making me smile my brother!!................thanx SO much!!..........T xo
Great write man, I especially love how you ended as you began just flipping those two lines, and breathing colour inyo my soul such deep words and definitely the signature line of this write. Man Dali brings out the best in you. I have to check out some more of his paintings I don't know too many of his works but what I've seen is incredible. Nicely done T.
Thanx Devon ~ it's so cool when you can tell someone has actually read your write and understood its nuances.........and agree.........DALI does bring out something in me.........as it does for millions..........but.....writing the inspiration felt..........is SO much fun and SO gratifying.........appreciate this bro...........peace...........T xo