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SAND CASTLES IN THE SKY

SAND CASTLES IN THE SKY

Droplets of salty spray from ocean waves,
drenched his ashen face 
As he stood looking out far beyond the horizon,
to a long off place
He thought of the days they had ran
as children, along the shore
Hand in hand splashing in waves,
until they reached the craggy tor

Then they`d climb until breathless,
and have to rest on even ground
All they could hear were breaking waves
as well as the seagulls,eerie sound
Many days were spent together by the ocean,
with sand between their toes
Building castles, investigating rock pools,
collecting shells, placing them in rows

He remembered she would always find
the prettiest mother of pearl
she would be in awe of their beauty
being a typical girl
he would go along with her tell her
she was just the best, at finding shells
As they sat on the craggy tor,waves crashing below
with the sound of seagulls yells

And now as he reminisced of his childhood
spent with her, tears began to fall
he realized he had always loved her
always putting her above all
Now it was to late to tell her,she had died this day
he had come to say goodbye
But his thoughts staring across the ocean were,
ill be with you soon my love,building sand castles in the sky 

 
 

 
 

 

   
    

 

 
 
 

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sparrowsong

Hello Sis Debs...

While I read this the song Just The Two Of Us came into my mind...

She will put her shovel down until the day...

Beautiful pic and write!

Thank you for sharing...

Hugs...

sparrowsong 

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Deborah Evans

Hi Sis Sparrowsong  I m singing along with you:-)
Glad you liked  this one Thank you for your 
comments, always a pleasure to read 
Hugs Debs 

 

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Tony Taylor

Wow!! DEBS!!... ,,what a fantastic read........ took me away into the nether-lands........ where the memories......... were SO thick...... that awakening suddenly to the realization that she was gone was profoundly sad....... .a fantastic narrative ......zo beautifully delivered that I did'nt want to awaken from its grasp.......... PINNED this my friend .......an excellent piece of poetic prose!!.......WOW!!.........LOVED IT!!..... .. LOVE and ROCKETS !!.......your friend and admirer........T xo.  ?☀✴✳♥

 

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Deborah Evans

Hi  Tony Aww so glad this write had that affect 
on you. I think of myself as an emotional writer 
So glad that the emotion came through, Thank you for the 
pin it is always an honor for me, and thank you 
for your wonderful comments dear friend .
Love n hugs Debs xo
 

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Greg Etsell

Deb what a great poem you have great imagination its wonderful your a great writer

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Deborah Evans

Hi  Greg I am so glad you enjoyed this one 
Thank you for your lovely comments they 
are very much appreciated 
Love n hugs Debs xo

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Deborah Evans

Hi  Merrill Thank you for these lovely words you write me 
I am truly humbled,I am I think very emotional in my writing but in life as well
I Love the beach  and the ocean and it would be my dream to live 
by the shore.
I am having a cup of tea with big smiles from ear to ear at your review
I wish for you the best of days with much fun and laughter too 
Thank you again, Warmest wishes Debs 

 

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Deborah Evans

Hi Lorris Thank you for reading and your 
kind comments They mean a lot 
Best wishes Debs 

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