Secrets

A tale of new bold and crisp,
Laden, traipse in shadows midst.
Bewildered, entrusted with whispers,
Torment dements, intrudes on vespers.
Voices deafen within the dark,
Innards twisted, non to hark.
Rooted in depth, an urge to free,
My tangled tongue renounced for thee.
Regrets to fathom or ascertain,
To spew the truth, I must refrain.
Burdened with secrets sporadically woven,
Imprisoned, I utter silence, no words spoken.
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Awesome stuff Simon! :)
Thank you Mitsali.
Hey Sir SIMON!!.....Secrets are definitely one of those things in life that will get you twisted and eat away at you from the inside out......A couple of the phrases left me scratching my head but then there are those that just blew me away~
~ "Bewildered, entrusted with whispers,
Torment dements, intrudes on vespers..."
You have such a unique way of 'turning a phrase' my friend......magical way with words.......ALL STARS!!......LOVE your style dear poet brother!!......LOVE & ROCKETS!!........T xo ?✴❤
Thank you Tony. Your comments are appreciated as always. I think i know what couple of lines you refer to as head scratchers and i think ill change them. Thank you my friend.