Seeking Love in a Raging Storm
Come the time I start believing in your love again,
Will circumstances carry my momentum, back?
Leaving you in the distance; an object out of reach;
A sweet whispering voice against the raging storm
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Am I to re- consider, the merits of predestination?
Is the future already written; or can I force the hand
Of miracles, for the sake of my comfort; my longing?
I know nothing certain, locked inside this mortal coil
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There’s always a danger, in movement and aspirations
Of the heart, and even with the brightest, most gilded
Hopes illuminating the path; the gates of our paradise
May shift like mercury from the outstretched hand.
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It’s not with the quality of discernment, but recklessness
We weave dreams of endless love and sweet promises;
Should our hopes spring eternal till the rainbows end,
Where winking Leprechauns may wait with sacks of ashes?
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Comments
WOW Chris!!.......I can totally relate to this..........excellent as always brother...........smiles........T xx
Tony so glad to hear from you my brother, thanks for comment T, hope all is well with you pal, keep the faith...Tony Taylor from Chicago
Thanks for comment, Cherie...yeah that image at the end I kept seeing, so I could not exclude it; fits the tone I figured; not a terribly optimistic poem to be sure lol....I love experimenting with putting words together, I think I would stop writing if I couldn't do that...and just for clarification, I don't necessarily write what I believe in, by nature I'm a hopeless romantic for the most part, yes love is indeed the most powerful force around, no denying, hey I always enjoy your commentary....I read a comment Jim made about me today, claiming that I can pick apart poetry very well and get into the mind of the writer; I was flattered, but I think he should be aware of your great ability to dissect a poem as well, one of a kind... also enjoy and thanks again for thought provoking words...cheers sis, stay well
Amazingly written. .. love it
thanks for saying that my friend, glad you enjoyed