SELFISH WORLD
Like a flower plucked too early
Before it blossoms in the spring
Like a bee thatâs lost all hope
When you take away itâs sting
Like a sea without a tide
Can it ever reach the shore
Like a man without a gun
Perhaps this world would not see war
All these things we sit and wonder
Is our world one foolish game?
If all these things did happen
Would life pan out just the same?
For a flower left to grow
It still withers up and dies
And a bee it wonât live long
For their stingâs the reason why
And a sea without a tide?
Well this Iâm not quite âshoreâ
But a man without a gun
Would find other weapons for war
So these questions have no answers
Itâs a complex life we live
But so hard to change the outcome
In a world that doesnât give ...
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This was amazing! Great insight and I love the way you ended it! It hinted at the message
~~"But so hard to change the outcome
In a world that doesnât give" ...
Thanks Curious, glad you liked:)
Great piece Rachel
I'm becoming a fan of yours x
Thanks Zane, I'm a big fan of yours too:)x
I love this Rachel, totally get you...Â
Maddison
:) Glad you liked Maddison, I always look out for your comments:)x
A superb piece Rachel well done sweety. It`s a poem that will get everyone thinking about the world. Well written and well thought through. Love G xx
Ah thanks Georgina, so glad you liked:)x
Rachel Gardiner
Great write, I enjoyed it well, My applause
Regards
WILLIAMSJI MAVELI
Thanks Willy:)
Perfect write Rachel Gardiner, very worldly questionings, in sure all relate, great work sweetheart, much love nardine xx
Cheers hun, much appreciate your comments as always:)
big 5 from me hon x thats our world  in as nut shell lol! well portrayed
Lol, ain't it just:( Â Cheers hun, always appreciate your comments:)x