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Sensational

Sitting here watching
The sunrise and it came up
Gradational and it made me
Feel sensational It filled my heart
with joy it will never part

Walking in life and watching
The birds and the bees
The butterflies the clouds
The rainbows The flowers
And it’s all so sensational
Very educational and I am so
Emotional to see the world
The way it is

Sitting here watching
The sunset it is so
Sensational and the way
Gradational it goes down
And how should it make me feel
Sensational.
 

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Neville

I reckon that every single aspect of nature is sensational Greg .. so I am once again, firmly in your corner sir ... Neville :)

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Marion

Beautiful write Greg x

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Greg Etsell

Thank you 
marion 
just to let you know that Jill
has Covid so does her husband

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Tony Taylor

Truly beautiful my friend.....and I loved the way you used repetition to create continuity in the poems rhyme scheme......Sensational, educational, gradational....clever stuff!!......ALL STARS!!......LOVE & ROCKETS!!.....T xo  : )

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Greg Etsell

Thank you Tony one of my favorite sites that I am in is called rhyme zone can you look up a word and it shows all the words that it rhymes with and even how to use as a sentence this is an awesome device to use almost every day 

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