Poem -
SEPTEMBER SOULS:DAY 7 WILLIAMSJI MAVELI CO-WRITES WITH SPARROWSONG, I SHALL BE IN YOUR ARMS
WILLIAMSJI writes.....
When my spiritual love play for this life not to end,
I shall be in your arms, further years to spend.
SPARROWSONG writes....
Weeping on my failures, rejoicing on my success,
Wondering if I could have loved you more or less
Williamsji writes.....
Would I preferred still more sun-rays and less rain,
Would I grab more passionate bliss or lovely pain?
SPARROWSONG writes....
Would I sacrifice for more affection, and less tear?
Walking across the life’s boarder lines without fear.
Co-written by
WILLIAMSJI - SPARROWSONG
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powerful message, nice write, nice rhyme.
congrats
A flawless rhyme to describe duo things more beautiful and simple life. The soul of September gathered crying at the failures and spreads vigorously before the success of the beloved. Greetings, congratulations on the insight and excellent composition.
Hello P.L. Jaison...
Thank you very much!
Hugs...
sparrowsong
Hello Lucas...
Greetings...
Thank you for your wonderful comment...
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sparrowsong
Hello Cherie...
Glad you like!
Thank you for your sweet comment...
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sparrowsong
Nice work, willy and sparrow, just a question about the last line, it says f
Now is fear supposed to be there, if so , nice work, well done to you both
Much love nardine xox
Hi Poetess Nardine,
Regret spell error, using my phone to post, please read the last line as below:
" Would I sacrifice for more affection, and less tear?
Walking across the life’s boarder lines without fear "
Thanks for reminding, error since I am on a journey,using my iPhone.
Love & hugs
Willy