Poem - 09 September 2014, 14:45 HAIKU Valerie Lynn Pain so incessant Falling into a deep sleep I forget to breatheĀ Ā© 2014 Valerie Lynn. All rights reserved. Like 0 Pin it 2 Support CosmoFunnel.com You can help support the upkeep of CosmoFunnel.com via PayPal. Views: 1136 Rating: Total votes: 4 Poetry Genre: Tragedy Haiku 4 comments
Tony Taylor09 September 2014, 15:39 Hey Val,........scary stuff sister!! (can totally relate, don't really want to, if ya know what I mean!)........that being said...........it's a PERFECT Haiku (5,7, 5)...........exceptional my friend............smiles.........TĀ xx Reply
Valerie Lynn15 September 2014, 18:32 Thank you Tony! I hope you find some relief for your pain soon...thinking about you! With Love, Val <3 Reply
WILLIAMSJI MAVELI11 September 2014, 23:07 Excellent Haiku, My applause, My vote Regards & Love WILLIAMSJI MAVELI Reply
Valerie Lynn15 September 2014, 18:34 Thank you Williamsji! I appreciate your applause and vote! Love, Val <3 Reply
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Hey Val,........scary stuff sister!! (can totally relate, don't really want to, if ya know what I mean!)........that being said...........it's a PERFECT Haiku (5,7, 5)...........exceptional my friend............smiles.........TĀ xx
Thank you Tony! I hope you find some relief for your pain soon...thinking about you!
With Love,
Val <3
Excellent Haiku, My applause, My vote
Regards & Love
WILLIAMSJI MAVELI
Thank you Williamsji! I appreciate your applause and vote!
Love,
Val <3