Shackles Of The Unlively Mind

I feel nothing.
Like a blank page.
Locked inside of a cage.
I can't figure out my life's destination.
I'm losing all concentration
My dreams are green of envy.
My thoughts aren't pure.
My rage is heavy.
I have no clear path.
No pavement before me.
I am standing here feelings God's wrath.
Singled out in a clearing.
Whispering curses that only the trees are hearing.
Scared to take a step.
Always fearing when God will strike next.
He laughs at my pain.
Pinning me to the ground in this chain.
I hate being locked in this cage.

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Hi Crystal,
I have pinned this exceptional poem and each time I revisit it I have a feeling that I will get something more from it. Mostly, on the first couple of readings, I get a retrospective image of myself during what with true retrospect I would call my glory years. When the forming of my future by anyone but me rankled so was resisted and yet I had no clue what I wanted to do.
So I spent a decade and a half (at least) as a roadie for half a dozen bands. Yes, with all that that entailed. Glory years just not very clearly remembered.
The other thing I get:
Very often when reading a poem I hear a strain of music in my mind:
I think the fighter always remains and that cages are sometimes just perceptions.
Really, really great write.
Nigel
Thank I'm glad to see it touched you in a different way and woke up a side of you that's been sleeping for awhile.
A very epic piece here. Excellent writing
Thank you ?
An honest account of how many of us feel at times.
Thank you so much .
There's a silent rage to this that is really intoxicating. I really like this...thank you.
T
This is definitely what that is. A silent rage that I'm just never allowed to speak upon.