Shadows + Dancing

Hi Marion, wow. I have been away for quite a while. But this was simply fantastic. Love the personification and the short sharpness that pulls that scared feeling. I hope you are ok, private message flying you way!!

Hello Marion, for me this reads like an internal battle. Relentless and weary, with an inability to find sense or reason anymore. Just my take, a clever write ❤ 

I agree with Gwen, this does read to me as though it is an internal battle but it could also be a brief meeting with a feral cat that has wandered into your garden. I am going with the internal fight but the alternative is also there for anyone who wants to read that. Poetry done well is great — yours is fantastic xx