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She dances with her shadow💕

She dances with her shadow💕

She dances with her shadows in the twilight of an eventide

As her silken woven silhouette linger’s closely by her side

Watching whilst whirling herself against the highest wall

Where this ghostly figure of her slendour body seems so very tall

Such a mystical magical presence strengthens that cool air

As people gaze bewitched at this beauty dancing there

Tho lost in her luminosity of lustred enlight

Her soul yearns salvation from the darkness of the night

She shows no awareness to the crowds in her wake

Nor does her spiritualistic body suffer any ache

So she moves mysteriously with her gyrating grooves within her shadow on the wall

Forsaking the raptured enchores for she hears not a single call...

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Jim "The Lad" ....

Great concept ! great symbolism! great insight! great write!...............lad

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Jill Tait

Awwww Thanking you kindly me lovely Jim the lad 💕💙💕

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Greg Etsell

wonderful poem 
when would go out 
waking in the morning
in the dark i would see
my shadow walk beside 
me i  would wave it waved back
odd right and say hello odd 
right  i was lucky it didnt say hi  back lol

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Jill Tait

Haha awww u were dancing with your shadow 💕🌹💕

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Shaun Cronick

Jill another captivating poem festooned with superb imagery and you can't beat a good dance poem that truly delivers the goods as yours clearly shows.
Another enthralling write and full honours gratefully given💓.

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Marion

Jill...you are just getting better and better!!! Your writes are always a pleasure to read ...hugs 💕

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Jill Tait

Awww so chuffed with your kindness my lovely lass 🌹💕🌹

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