Poem -

A Thing About Blue Eyes

she was a poem broken ..
punctuated
only by a series of subtle
pauses
and a steady flow of lies ..
she was known
to argue with echoes ..
find fault
with perfection
and frown upon sorrow ..
but make love
with a hunger and passion
she reserved
only for men, with blue eyes ..

 

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Being Me

Love this! How you likened her to a poem... and the ending lines. Brilliant x

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Neville

and I love the fact you took time to stop by my friend .. thank you so much .. x

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Gwendoline

Nev your pen never ever disappoints. This is such a perfect little poem that holds an abundance inside its lines. I agree with Tina how you worked her into the formatting of poetry. Doubly poetic writing here my friend x

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