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She said to me

She said  to me

     She said to me, " somethings wrong boy I just feel like I'm alone, this is no longer our happy home"
"I find no joy, the magic just died, I've tried and tried and tried and tried, you're always stoned"

I said, " Baby cool down things will all be fine, let's take a ride and get you some wine and play our favorite song"
" Let me wipe the tears from your eyes, let's give this Love another try, we've been together so long"

She said, " What we had has up and gone, I want you packed and out by dawn, there's nothing left to say"
" I can no longer live this way, feeling like your personal slave, Please just go away"

I said, " Baby girl please listen to me, I can be everything you need me to be, just one more chance"
"Let me hold you one more time, to rekindle the spark and the fire, just one last dance"

She said, " I no longer have feelings for you, you have no idea what you put me through, I can take it no more"
"Your touch is cold, your thoughts  all selfish, I don't love you, I just can't help it, it's not the same as it was"

I said, "very well, I'll leave in the morning, I guess tonight you will just ignore me, you do that well"
"I'll take my things, you keep your ring, And tomorrow you can go straight to hell"

2020

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Tony Taylor

WOW!! CHARLES!!.....this is VERY compelling poetic prose......it's not easy to deliver dialogue in any form......but to do it in this poetic narrative form is difficult and you've pulled it off with flying colors here my friend......and although the subject matter is truly sad it's certainly something that almost EVERYONE can relate to!!.......ALL STARS & PINNED!!......a fine write dear poet brother!!.......LOVE & ROCKETS!!.......T xo  : )

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Popop Rifici

Love and Rockets to you
Hannah jane  helped me
  like Kid Rock and that awesome song
 I put your picture away
Thank you  TT

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Popop Rifici

Tony Taylor
 Do  tell me please
 what ever happened to Dblankportrait ?
Thank you

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Popop Rifici

well I used to think he ran cosmofunnel
 fact is if he died 
his works would still be up
when they take your 4999 poems and 9888 comments and delete them 
you screwed up
lost all his work 
he deserved it 
in my eyes 
creepier  man I never knew 

a way with words in his own mind

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Addison Willerbee

OOf charles. A thrilling piece that makes my insides sQuiRm. I sincerely hope whatever you went through, to have the feelings portrayed by this poem, is hopefully over. Keep your head high! If you don't have her, at least you have great writing capabilities!

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