~ She Shines the Night ~
With black light I discovered her shine
By evening's night
With fireflies
And the steady sparkling
Of her shyness
Where golden slumber
Is not fantasized,
Or forgotten,
Her strength is there
Where Antoninus,
Once, in a letter
Dared to compare
Her lovely countenance,
To the light of day,
Where children play
In the healing waters
Of her shine,
Which
At days end,
Does light
The dark night...
Her shine
Is as a sun
On morning's horizon,
Where buttercups and busy bees
Conspire,
In summer's
Breathtaking breeze,
To lead the way
Into her shyness,
Filtering a feeling
That radiates
From her quintessence
Where,
Love is born
And is,
The metamorphosis,
That turns the night,
Into day.....
Tony Taylor
* for a dear friend of mine
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Wonderful poem
Thank you GREG!!
Totally awe inspiring my so creatively talented poetic penfriend ❤️❤️❤️
Why thank you Miss JILL!!.....as always I am more than grateful for your kind words dear poet sister!!........smiles.......T xo : )
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What a beautiful gift of thought Sir Tony
i do hope your friend appreciates your affection.
I think she does Sir Barker!!....I think she does!!......smiles & many thanx kind Sir!!.........Peace n Stuff!!........T xo : )
Love this Tony, such a warm and mystical feeling to it. I would NOT be surprised if you get nominated for the contest with this one. Fantastic!!
Thanx MAX!!......I don't think I can be nominated again!!....but thanx so much for the 'way cool' thought!!.....Lots of love to you and yours brother!!/......smiles.......T xo : )
In succinct terms & to be precise, quite simply beautiful sir .. N :)
Aww.....VERY cool!!....Thank you Sir!!......smiles.....T xo : )
............................. I am sitting here and smiling back at ya too :)
Really beautiful, oh! Such lucky is your friend.
Hey KISHORE!!....So nice to hear from you.....thank you for this.....gonna head to your page now to see what you've been up to lately!!....talk soon!!........smiles.......T xo : )
Hello Tony, I must agree with all that has been said, this is a stunning write. Your heartfelt words ooze love and adoration. The reader sees through your eyes, and what a wondrous sight you see my friend. For you clearly have a heart of gold, to write such beautiful words for someone else
Your admiring buddy
Gwen x
Thank you so much GWEN!!....you DO see/interpret poetry beautifully and I am ever so grateful to you for taking the time to read and comment on my offerings!!.......You're the coolest!!......Big Smiles!!......T xo : )
I think any lady would be truly honored to have this wonderful work.dedicated to her Tony, it takes the reader on a journey of beginnings ...of discovering the sweet inside the wrapper...stunning work and so pinned X
Wow Thank you MARION!!....I didn't see this until just now.....thanx tons dear poet sister!!.....I am SO more than just happy about this comment....I can't tell you how much this means to me!!.....you're the coolest!!......stay groovy girlfriend!!.....Big Smiles!!......T xo : )