Poem - 12 February 2015, 10:10 SHHH...And SHOW Nikki Roberts Your mouth is so worn and FOULED from VOICING those many good intentions, while your FEET stand PRISTINE on ground ZERO. Like 0 Pin it 1 Support CosmoFunnel.com You can help support the upkeep of CosmoFunnel.com via PayPal. Views: 856 Rating: Total votes: 3 Tags: Action Poetry Genre: Prose Topic: Five Senses 6 comments
Beth Landheart12 February 2015, 10:21 Punch in the gut, clever write. Less talk, more action. Good job, Nikki. Is that a picture of you?? If so, you're a cutie pie. (that's extra I know) :) Reply
Nikki Roberts12 February 2015, 10:24 Ha! Thank you for complimenting both prose and picture, Beth. My heart grew wings to fly. Reply
Valerie Lynn12 February 2015, 17:09 Powerful write Nikki! Excellent job! A vote from me!! Val ♥️ Reply
Christopher Correia19 February 2015, 20:38 Well said, Nikki and a terrific poem as well...love reading this 'put your money where your mouth is' message...high edutainment value...cheers Reply
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Punch in the gut, clever write. Less talk, more action. Good job, Nikki. Is that a picture of you?? If so, you're a cutie pie. (that's extra I know) :)
Ha! Thank you for complimenting both prose and picture, Beth. My heart grew wings to fly.
Powerful write Nikki! Excellent job! A vote from me!!
Val ♥️
Val, I'm better for your encouragement. Thank you!!
Well said, Nikki and a terrific poem as well...love reading this 'put your money where your mouth is' message...high edutainment value...cheers
Kissed by words!! Thank you, Christopher!!