Poem -
silence of the night.
The feelings of the light,
Keep me,
up at night,
Alone in the shallows,
Dreaming wide awake,
Longing for the touch,
upon my skin ,
Waiting for the warmth,
to seep in,
To fill the deepest parts,
Of my heart,
With love,
Evaporating despair,
Dreaming wide awake,
Waiting for the light,
To bring back colours bright,
Its empty within the shadows,
The nights they are so long,
First light is amazing,
Birds singing in loving song,
I lay here in the darkness,
Dreaming of the light,
Oh how i wish,
I could live forever without,
The silence of the night.
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Comments
Nardine Sanderson,
Deep write, You have grasped the entire poetic aptitudes within tow three months, your verses are amazing, My applause, My vote
Love, regards
WILLIAMSJI
Thank you sir williamsji, my dearest friend, appreciation and love nardine Sanderson xoxo
Hi Nardine, There is something very special about this piece, it flows like a dream, and the placement of the line..."Dreaming wide awake" is very timely and maintains that dreamlike quality.........I had to read it three times to soak it in......it was lovely....it took me away..............well done my friend.......tony
Thank you sweetheart, means alot to me that you care for this write, it means alot to me, love to you dearest Tony xoxo nardine xx