Poem -
Silence(S)peaks
As the silence begins to speak,
warriors come together to fight.
Standing, holding their brethren,
silenced by the long night.
Lost among their demons,
Of an unforgettable past.
Sheltered from society,
inside a shadowy cast.
A place where demons and warriors dance,
as their personal battles rage.
If only we’d had a glance,
as the silence began to peak.
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Comments
Wow PATRICK!!...this is a VERY powerful poetic insight....and written with the perfect rhythm and timing of a limerick's rhyme scheme.....Your choice of subject matter too....lends itself to the power that your phrasing is overflowing with......ALL STARS & PINNED!!.......well conceived and BEAUTIFULLY delivered!!......and I noticed that you have posted very few poems here since 2017.......I look forward to your possibly sharing more.....it's good stuff dear poet brother!!.......LOVE & ROCKETS!!.......T xo : )
Ps. I tried to leave 5 stars but it wasn't working properly : (
Thank you so much the insightful review of this personal poem. It was written in dark times 2017-2019 when I became homeless. It’s about my fight with those demons and suicidal tendencies. I fought with myself over posting this one as it’s very personal to me. I felt that this place would appreciate the poetic justice of the inner demons. Thank you sir once again for the insightful response.
I always rhyme as it shows the world my short time .... Patrick
Wow. Comments from Tony on your work is always impressive. And what a deserving post this is. Such a clever clever write. I enjoyed it a hell of a lot. Kind regards. The Fish of the Sea
Thank you for the comments and compliments. I’m new here once more and I don’t know all the powerful poets and authors as of yet. I’m only a carrier of the penned poet.. not tried to publish any of them, yet!
Patrick
This is a very powerful.write Patrick...more so for its elusiveness, it conjures up so many different images in my head but the overall feeling is one of lonliness ...hugs 😊
It is one of loneliness and fighting my personal demons. Thank you for the review and for reading my work....
Patrick