Poem -
Silent Night
Re-
Birth birth
Bloody
rebirth
(Water? Fire?)
Β
Blind
birth
Re-
Birth birth
Ambiguous
birth
(Boy? Girl?)
Precarious
birth
Re-
Birth birth
Blinding
birth
(Darkness? Light?)
Β
Scarring
birth
Re-Β
Birth birth
Shaming
birth
(Clothed? Naked?)
Naming
birth
Re-
Birth birth
Deadly
birthΒ
(Sinner? Saint?)
Drowning
birth
Smack!
"Welcome to new planes"
I cry
I stretch
Re-
Birth birth
Hurts.Β
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This is friggin' brilliant RAJAN!!......I LOVE the way you formatted this piece......and the repetition works beautifully......giving a perfect rhythmic flow to the whole!!.......ALL STARS & PINNED!!.......well done dear poet brother...and.......WELCOME to COSMO!!......LOVE & ROCKETS!!.....T xoΒ : )
Thanks Tony. I took risk on this one. Was quite a bold move. Glad it came together.Β
SHALOM π€
Great write. Welcome to Cosmofunnel
Cheers... had a hiatus from writing the last 2 years. It's good to get back into it.Β