Simply Beyond Help

Zounds!
longing for a
merciful descent into
the terminal ground
where smoky eyes
semi-watch
streams of
semi-(dis)information
exhaled from
smoking brains
on a mission
to search &
deconstruct
ticking clocks
taunt
timely bombs
lost in
purple blobs
of
orange haze
awaiting
purging deluges
sprinkled with
white bolts of
blinding hell
the raving
raven's
feathers flicker
while
flippant tentacles
grope skyward
for
divine decisions
tickling
a sickly brain
Ā that
Ā bemoans
Ā its feckless fate
we shall overwhelm
a sizzling planet
striving for
Ā brief moments of holiness
in a pit of
squirming soothsayers
Ā de-coupling
Ā from
Ā determinism
becoming
tomorrowās
sorrow
Mercy me!
a pseudo-prayer
crawls out of
a mournful mouth
(āhelp me Help MeHelpMe!!!ā)
Ā muttering
Ā monotonic mantras
Ā replete with
Ā rollicking ruminations
Ā reverberating from
Ā titanic implosions
Ā in the dark
Ā deep sea of
Ā terrible time
In conclusion...
simply
beyond
Help
--njv(2023/2024)
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What a state of affairs we humans wrought. Intuitive writeā¦.
Thanks, John--appreciate your feedback.
Hello NJV! Hereā¦āin a pit of squirming soothsayers de-coupling from determinationā¦ā if right here the āplanetā could have a break, a pause, even just a brief moment, it would be a healing thing. In the overwhelming chaos of living, we all need a pauseā¦. to breathe.Ā
Greetings,Ā
BernadeteĀ
Thanks for reading my poem & your comment.
Love the way the words engulf the reader like a torrent of hellish waves with no escape from the meaning which could be the personal hell of a falling soul or the unavoidable collective hell of a dying planet x
Marion--many thanks for your perceptive comment on my poem (probably superior to my poem). My intention was to encompass both viewpoints (personal hell & dying planet).
IĀ haven't read a poem of yours yet that I didn't absolutely love...I'm a fan š¤š¤š¤
Thanks, Raechel--really appreciate your feedback!