Poem -
sixteen
I only know what is this love.
I only know this pain.
The highlight of my youth
Gone, in its entirety
Wasted on the pagan of ones affection.
The dullness of life has resonated with the beat of my heart.
While my mind confines to simple with interest.
The need for constant adoration still resides, as I stand at the burial of true feeling.
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Other than a minor spelling error (waisted should read wasted, for example), I found this to be very raw and vividly expressed, Taylor.
Nicely penned free verse poetry.
~Dean Kuch ♥♫♪?♪♫♥
ahhh cant believe I didnt see that. :/ thank you so much,I made the correction ❤️??♀️ and I really appreciate your comment :)
Hey TAYLOR!!.....I agree with Dean here ......and......I especially liked that final line ~
~ "The need for constant adoration still resides,
as I stand at the burial of true feeling"
Well done dear poet sister!!......LOVE & ROCKETS!!......T xo ??✴?
Thanks so much!!❤️