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Skipping Stones

Dedicated to Greg Etsell

Skipping Stones

Please all gather round and listen,
For I have a cherished tale to tell.
Of memories young and innocent,
And a loved older brother as well.

Huckleberry Finn and Tom Sawyer,
We'd call ourselves when together.
Two young dreamers free as birds,
Both adventurous birds of a feather.

On an early sunny June morning,
WeΒ  journeyed to a special place.
A river smooth as mill pondΒ silk,
As dragonflies danced with grace.

The sun was shining down on us,
As we dived in for a cooling swim.
For hours we played in it's water,
Then the real magic was to begin.

I'll show how to skip a stone,
My smiling brother said to me.
Picked up a stone flat and smooth,
Flicked his wrist and set it free.

It hit the water then disappeared,
Then surfaced and began to skip.
Magically again, again and again,
Then eventually taking its final dip.

I was just completely awestruck,
At what I had just dazzlingly seen.
I will teach how my brother winked,
Dizzy at the spectacle that had been.

You'll need a flat smooth stone,
Placed between forefinger and thumb.
Flick your wrist and follow through,
While with the water keeping it plumb.

Eagerly I then found my skip stone,
The excitement building within me.
Then threw it with all my might,
Thinking it would travel out to sea.

I was so tragically disappointed,
It simply vanished with a loud plop.
My second attempt was much better,
Eight joyful steps and then did stop.

The secret's in timing it just right,
Bend your knees and throw it low,
Arm back then power in that flick,
Try doing that before letting it go. ​​​​​​

My brother was on the money,
His good advice plain and clear.
I was rewarded with twenty steps,
And a memory to forever revere.

Now we've become slightly older,
With small grandkids of our own.
Adventurous boys and girls alike,
Who smile when skipping a stone.

Dedicated to Greg Etsell a good man with a good heart.
The best.

Β 

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Greg Etsell

Shaun what wonderful poem
loved the video you out did yourselfΒ 
here Brilliant work my friendΒ 
thank you so much for dedicationΒ 
you have made my day thank you

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Shaun Cronick

Greg you so thoroughly deserve this for being the man you are.
And thank you suggesting the theme for you brought back many, many happy memories to recall.
And you have made my day with your treasured comment my friend and that video is something else.
And you are a good man with a good heart for all members on here.
Simply the best!

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Jill Tait

Awww Brilliant Greg will love this as I, you are brilliant at narrations, truly I was there in that lovely scene 🌹❀️🌹

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Marion

A truly magical write Shaun...thoroughly enjoyed this read and Greg is so deserving...like Jill he is a constant presence on Cosmo always commenting and boosting us with his votes. God bless ❀️

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Jim "The Lad" ....

sorry I skipped this one accidentally! great write and dedication Shaun!..................................................Jim

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Being Me

Omg!Β  How did I miss this one?? πŸ™ˆΒ  well, I have seen and read it now and very glad I am too. Firstly what a lovely dedication. Greg is truly deserving of it. Greg is number one on Cosmo for all his support to everyone. He is a genuinely lovely guy. Give it up for Greg (big round of applause here πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘Β  Right, secondly ... this poem conjures up childhood memories as easy as it is to eat strawberries and cream. The picture you paint here is superb and it's one that leaves a lovely warm feeling in your heart. It is wholesome and happy. Idyllic. A fabulous poem and worthy dedication all rolled into one outstanding piece of work. πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘Β  another round of applause here!

I am so sorry that I missed this one when it was posted x

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Pratibha Savani

A simply wonderful dedication to our Greg! Always there to support us and quite fitting a dedication of adventure and fun!Β 
love your narrative rhyme. You do it so well with do move detail that really sets the mood and feel of this story. Brilliant.Β 
I still have much to catch up on so you will see comments soon. Fury will have to wait, it is long and want to read in full when I have good time!!Β 
chat soon! Px

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