Poem -

Smell Testing

Smell Testing

Bit into a rancid concept...

Delicious to the eye
but thoroughly rotten inside...

After I spit the vile sandwich out
I vowed henceforth
to ride shotgun with doubt
and always check
the expiration date
before blindly
consuming externally
every convenient theory
that just so happens to fit
my current narrative...

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Tony Taylor

Excellent work STEVE!!...for so often is the case that it does seem to fit most scenarios perfectly.......whether it be a relationship or a sandwich!!......PINNED for insightful, delightful, "Casting Of Doubt!".......smiles.....LOVE & ROCKETS!!....T xo  :  )

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Steve Green

Thanks Mr T ...  Truth truly is a pliable commodity these days ;) 

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Gwendoline

Hello Steve :) I enjoyed this a lot, for not everything is as it seems. I also really enjoyed the picture and quote lol. It compliments perfectly the message you were conveying. A pukka poem 👌 

Gwen x 

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Steve Green

Thanks for the kind words Gwen...More and more these days truth is whatever we want it to be

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