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Smoke rings in the dark

Smoke rings in the dark

Strong tobacco engulfs the air as they blow smoke rings in the dark

Whilst one lights up another cigarette using his lighter, with a flicker and a spark

And a cloak of choking cloudiness saturates the snug room

Adding to the humdrum ambience, amidst the wraths of winter’s gloom

Retired, old chaps sitting blaspheming  in a local bar

Most of them were dropped off with their better halves driving their car

Just living around the corner, so the walk home isn’t very far

As they chatter loudly about bygone times, above the strumming of a guitar

And these geriatric characters meet up here almost every night

Where the stale stench of nicotine rises in ripples up a height

All huddled up together amidst the hazy candle light

Lots of glassy-eyed Grandads shining through the darkness within a boozy plight..

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Greg Etsell

wonderful poem
now a days you cant smoke 
in any bar but remmber the 
days you could being 
former smoker it 
didnt bother me
but now it does  

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Jill Tait

Yes I remember those smokey bars too, our clothes used to stink the next morning n I never ever smoked ❤️❤️❤️

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Greg Etsell

oh good for you for not smokeing
i quit 2 times and have not smoked
since 1998 and i glad for it 

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Jill Tait

Ay its a mugs game n a nasty habit !!! 💕❤️💗

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Greg Etsell

Yes it is I don’t miss it at all

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Jill Tait

Well Done you 💕🌹💕

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Tony Taylor

JILL!! wow!!....what a fantastic representation.....an utterly "Nail On The Head" poetic image of the truth of a pub with older gentleman and their collective war stories!!.....One of my favorite JILL POEMS ever.....this is fine writing dear poet sister!!......Powerful imagery that ever-lasts!!.......PINNED!!....wow!...great work!!.......LOVE & ROCKETS!!.......T xo  : )

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Jill Tait

Awwww ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️

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