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Snowflakes.

Snowflakes whisper forever untold secrets. only the ones who are willing to listen will be revealed into a world of magic and mystery. so listen closely and don't miss this moment that could be wrote down  in history.

Is your mind still wandering? Dont say just listen closely. I see the precious cut white snow fall around us ever so graciously, feel the memories rise whether in the sunset or sunrise, i see them all threw your eyes. 
Spin around with me, ill hold you closely while we try not to fall asleep, let us take in this new found beauty, of the snow flakes that surround us while we listen intently.
So elegant so beatiful each one that touches your skin. i will capture it all just for one more kiss from your soft tender lips. While the sun is setting the snow flakes start to gather.
 I close my eyes to imagine we are together. I take your hand so we start to dance. 
Ever so slowly, as the snowflakes cover your lips, let is snow, let it snow, until we are covered and lost within it. 
The stars are out. The refelction is in your eyes. How amazing it is.. To be lost in a place. To be lost in time.
Let the snow fall in your hair, breathe in and feel the cool refreshing air., let it in your heart,. let it in your mind.. with these stars that shine.... our moment is captured.. just like we captured time..
Never wanting to leave this place.. with your hands in mine, underneath the shining stars we are truly lost in time..
I see them falling all around us threw your eyes.. 
Snowflakes.. the beauty of them how they preciously capture the moments in time.. Don't let your chance slip by.

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Shirley Pourbaba

Hi George,

I truly enjoyed your write, As I was reading away a feeling of calm overtook me, and the imagery you drew took me right into the whole seen, very meditative, hope you will consider making this into a short video, I think it will be great.

Cheers

Shirley Pouebaba

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George Weidele

Thank you! I will see what I can do about making it a short film. Thank you again!

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AUTHOR WILLIAMS...

George Weidele

Good write, Thanks for sharing, Nominated

So elegant so beautiful ( ? spell check error; correct and edit ) each one that touches your skin. i will capture it all just for one more kiss from your soft tender lips. While the sun is setting the snow flakes start to gather.

Regards & Love

WILLIAMSJI MAVELI

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George Weidele

Thank You so much. I appreciate the feed back and will correct it. Thank you again!!

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Georgina Richardson

A stunning piece George and a very interesting and enjoyable read. It was as Shirley says `very calming` and it flowed beautifully. Really well done sweety, so keep writing for us as you have superb talent and I want to read more from you. Love George xx

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