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So Slowly Move

So Slowly  Move

So slowly move theĀ  hands of time,
aroundĀ  the chequered boardĀ  of life,
faltering, then moving on,
relentless in its endless journey.
Sweeping though the joys of youth,
surpassing angst and doubt,
Yet never resting once to let
unwilling travellers out

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StevieC

Beautiful, poignant! As always Lodi!

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A Lonely Journey

Grammy,Ā 
Awesome! I think that about describes that. I just loved that. So thoughtful, and thought provoking. Beautifully done, my honorary Grammy. Had to Pin it.Ā 
Funny how life's hours drag sometimes, isn't it? Yet the years just fly by. Times a funny thing.Ā 
Loved it!!Ā 

Matthew.Ā 

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lodigiana

Thanks so much Matthew, pleased you enjoyed it. Time really is a strange thing isn't it ?can't really quantify it but we all have to live by it and when you get older you will be amazed at how quickly the days, weeks, months and years seem to fly by!...So nice that you comments so kindly hun..relly appreciate it....Grammy xxxx

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lodigiana

Ah yes Cherie, that wretched thing time..just goes marching on relentlessly! I guess that why we should just truly enjoy the moment..every moment! Thanks so much for commenting hun- appreciate itĀ  Lodigiana xx

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Marion

Very thought provoking....enjoyed the read my friend ??

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lodigiana

Thank you so much Marion, really appreciate that! xx

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