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So What Do You Think?

So What Do You Think?

There use to be a time
when I was of a mind
to cast my influence
into the raging river
of public opinion

Such was my hubris
in powers of persuasion
with logical arguments
as the primary weapon
in my word arsenal

It did not take long
to realize this core premise
was flawed

Penetrating locked in minds
requires more than a quick wit
or clever repartee

People don't wanna change
out of their comfortable
entrenched positions

So after many years
of banging my hard head
against inflexible walls
I finally saw the fallacy
of pointless debates

Now I let friends and foes alike
rant their pet philosophies unopposed

Biting my heavily scarred tongue
for the sake of keeping the peace

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Deborah Evans

Hi Steve Great write I too liked to debate 
and  have opinions on variety of topics 
I still do to a certain extent but as you say sometimes you 
have to bite your tongue and hold back because 
sometimes whatever you say it is like as you said
" banging my hard head
against inflexible walls"
Really enjoyed Best wishes Debs 

 

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Steve Green

Thanks Deb.  We all learn as we go (hopefully)

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Jai Masters

This poem Steve is a good reminder to me 

not to hit my head against a brick wall! 

I liked the message and your style of writing 

and see this as a helpful poem and great contribution to the topic of happiness this 

month. Cute image too :))) 

Luv from Jai:) 

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