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To (Some) Women

To (Some) Women

Man is not your enemy

You are your worst energy

So put the blame on you

Placing the blame

When you played the game

And got hurt

Is like lying about truth

-Not all men are bad so please don't generalize or group them

CO

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sparrowsong

Absolutely RIGHT!

THANK YOU

CO

I know that, but the way you put that out there...

RIGHT ON!

sparrowsong

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Curious Onlooker

Thank you so much..someone had to because to generalize a whole gender is ridiculous but a lot of women do

CO

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Nardine Sanderson

Heya sweetie, true i hear loads of different saying over here about men
~ i think the women who use these just have bad taste in men, and a bad track record in relationship's, funny thing though my new male friend stated that all women are crazy
~ i guess it goes both way's,
p.s I've met plenty of stand over woman haters', and. Quote my favourite line growing up in my teen's, all men were created equal assholes until proven otherwise.
lucky i grew up beyond that haha, but further met more @%£&%£#*,
appreciate this write, it stands alone xoxo much love to ya x

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Curious Onlooker

Yeah I fully understand that my poem is standing alone right now but that's ok and  I agree it can go both ways, and you are blessed to not have grown up in such a narrow mindset, initially I expected to get a lot of hate for this write but I appreciate that you gave feedback in a mature way, thank you

CO

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Nardine Sanderson

I appreciate this write, ever heard the saying some women give other women a bad name , well you just slapped that in the face politely, thanks heaps:) ❤

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Curious Onlooker

I just had to smile for that one :) there is hope then, thank you as well for putting just a little more hope in my heart :)

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Nardine Sanderson

Awww hehe anytime, keep on being you :) we never Change the good just alter the bad xoxo

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sparrowsong

I think when they experience MAJOR DISASTER...

It is hard for some people to TRUST AGAIN...

Everyone has to take responsibility for their actions...

Some can just say...

It's gone...

Nothing to fight for...

GIVE YOUR HEART A KISS...

sparrowsong

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Curious Onlooker

True everyone really does that includes all races and genders because to get hurt makes trust an iffy topic but people need to realize that one rotten apple wont ruin the tree, thanks for the feedback Sparrow.
CO

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