Poem -
someone i loved
it feels like she grabbed my heart,
and held it so gently, and always had it.
but in reality, she was just squeezing it,
tighter and tighter until i couldnβt breathe,
couldnβt function, couldnβt pull myself
out of her grasp without tearing my heart in two.
and now i have, and she still has half of it,
broken and bleeding, and wonβt give it back.
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Comments
Beautiful
Hello ALEX!!
A well delivered piece of poetic prose that delves into the idea of pain and the aspects of Love's potentially abusive underlying intent!!..... this doesn't read as 'Beautiful' to me....... it comes across as being in the mind of someone who has experienced being stalked or something similar!!..... unfortunately it happens ALOTΒ in this crazy-ass reality we reside in!!......ALL STARS!!...VERY compelling subject matter dear poet brother!!...... well done...... and.....WELCOME to COSMO!!......LOVE & ROCKETS!!.........T xo ?β΄β€
Great write. Pinned.
Woah the imagery is sensational. Well written piece