someone special

When I held him and I felt as if the world
Was ending while it just started , as if
The rain was raining while the sun
Was hotter to burn your body
As if it was wet while it was just dry
While he held me he reminded me
About those million dreams , thousand
Kisses and hundred worlds he blinded me to
forget  which road to take in destiny
he made me feel as if I was on top
of the world instead it was on top of us
he took the broken pieces
of my heart and put them
together like a crossword puzzle ,
 so patient he is,
he never laid a finger or shout at me ,
he picked up when I fall down after my deepest
scars and secrets are reviled .
He made me feel loved when
 I dragged misery in to the empty stomach
I would kneel , he would kneel with
Even if we prayed God in a devil’s room
Because of him I am happy
He is really someone special.
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so good a feeling when you find that someone at last to make you feel special .lovely piece mahlatse  .tinaÂ
that makes me feel like writing for u all every second thanks
You put some lovely sentiment in your writing Mahlatse and really emotive lines! Â A very nice write :)
thanks Rachel even you poems are much better than mine
how long have you been writing?
I have always enjoyed writing since I was a child Mahlatse but I've been writing poetry for fun since finding Cosmo, for about 4 months now.  It's become a bit of a passion, I love it :)  How long have you been writing?
I have been writing for 3 years
I am turning 14 on the 15november hoping you could post me present or wish me happy birth day.
Rachel poetry to me is my life it helps me escape from my hurtful emotions it is for fun but to me it is who I am and what I wish to have in life like a great education for my upcoming 4years in high school
like life is something else is fiction and a mother's love
send me you email address I will send you my term1-3 reports from south Africa
bye the way great poems
Thanks for reading Mahlatse, and keep writing :)