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someone special

When I held him and I felt as if the world

Was ending while it just started , as if

The rain was raining while the sun

Was hotter to burn your body

As if it was wet while it was just dry

While he held me he reminded me

About those million dreams , thousand

Kisses and hundred worlds he blinded me to

forget  which road to take in destiny

he made me feel as if I was on top

of the world instead it was on top of us

he took the broken pieces

of my heart and put them

together like a crossword puzzle ,

 so patient he is,

he never laid a finger or shout at me ,

he picked up when I fall down after my deepest

scars and secrets are reviled .

He made me feel loved when

 I dragged misery in to the empty stomach

I would kneel , he would kneel with

Even if we prayed God in a devil’s room

Because of him I am happy

He is really someone special.

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Tina Moore

so good a feeling when you find that someone at last to make you feel special .lovely piece mahlatse   .tina 

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Mahlatse Tlhako

that makes  me feel like writing for u all every second thanks

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BLOSSOM

You put some lovely sentiment in your writing Mahlatse and really emotive lines!  A very nice write :)

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Mahlatse Tlhako

thanks Rachel even you poems are much better than mine

how long have you been writing?

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BLOSSOM

I have always enjoyed writing since I was a child Mahlatse but I've been writing poetry for fun since finding Cosmo, for about 4 months now.  It's become a bit of a passion, I love it :)  How long have you been writing?

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Mahlatse Tlhako

I have been writing for 3 years

I am turning 14 on the 15november hoping you could post me present or wish me happy birth day.

Rachel poetry to me is my life it helps me escape from my hurtful emotions it is for fun but to me it is who I am and what I wish to have in life like a great education for my upcoming  4years in high school

like life is something else is fiction and a mother's love

send me you email address I will send you my term1-3 reports from south Africa

bye the way great poems

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BLOSSOM

Thanks for reading Mahlatse, and keep writing :)

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