Poem -
Lighthearted Thought
βWhat is Laphroaig?β
An evanescent taste of the nights' habits,
with the ominous scent of money.Β
Grudgingly staring at my youth-
with a deep throat,
it pours in aged noise.Β
βA single malt whiskey.β
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My dear friend/poet!......if you're going to alter your state of consciousness.....may as well partake of the 'Single malt'........what's that ISLE again?........whatever it is.....I can't visit......they'd find me beneath the bar in the morning ........wearing a VERY and beaming SMILE!!......LOL!!.......you're awfully cool!!...smiles!!...T ??β₯
Thank you dear poet I do agree- I'm a red wine/cab sav girl at heart, but I don't mind a nice peated whiskey on a quiet evening! Well, I guess we will just have to visit Islay in our throats..Β bahaha, thank you for your kindness and shining positivity. Love to you my friend x
Such a pleasure to read aspiring writers.Β
There is joy in something well made. Almost anything that the creator poured their heart and soul into.
Hard to fault a single malt lovingly nursed into existence.
Hard not to enjoy words so creatively joined as to cause thought, a wistful smile and perhaps a mouthwatering memory.
John
Thank you John, I really appreciate the meaningful feedback- it's lovely to know that you have extracted these thoughts from this small poem. The only thing a writer could ask for, is for someone to take something out of their work. Thanks so much againΒ