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SOMETHING SPECIAL THIS WAY COMES?

SOMETHING SPECIAL THIS WAY COMES?

Something special this way comes?

The moment I could reach death...

Just a few more minutes and I would be gone...

Gone from this world without a trace...

The words play over and over in my head...

I didn't mean for it to happen...

I wasn't trying to kill myself...

Someone wanted me here?

I needed to stay...

Another voice said...

You are very lucky...

Someone must be watching over you...

So many questions left unanswered...

Something special this way comes?

Hugs...

sparrowsong 

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Richard Waters

This is a piece showing consummate skill in conveying the effect of life changing events.

Perceptions change when dramatic situations arise with a complete reappraisal of what your circumstances are.

Nice write !

Love and hugs !  :)

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sparrowsong

Hello Richard...

I used to be afraid of the dying process...

I am not afraid anymore...

I want to live as long as I can...

I want to enjoy all the living I can do...

Being within minutes of no return...

That's when I really began to be extremely thankful for the blessings that I was given and the time I had to enjoy...

I was worried for my children...

I was worried for my folks...

To come that close to being taken out of this world and to be able to go home and still have all my faculties...

I know our life here can be very temporary...

I am careful of the answers I seek...

Some things are difficult to explain still...

Many things I have lost I have also gained...

Thank you for your wonderful comment...

Hope you are well!

Haven't seen you much...

Wishing the best for you...

Take care of you...

Love and hugs! :) 

sparrowsong 

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Larry Ran

Hi Sweet Sparrowsong,

Whew!  Sparrowsong spared.  We are very lucky that someone was watching over you, for "something special" then came our way.  The sweet Sparrowsong, who shares her heart and soul with her most avid fans.

Hugs, Peace and Love,

xox Larry

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