Poem -
Somewhere Behind These Eyes
Somewhere Behind These Eyes
Somewhere Behind These Eyes
You can not punish me
with silence
My ears crave the hush
Neither can you hurt me
now with poetry
For I am since blinded
And no longer crave or care
for words
So pray be still and quiet
Your moment is no more
but gone and truly lost
Such moments are but sins tho
At least they are in my book
and still in draft form
Somewhere behind these eyes
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Haha I dated someone once who used to dish out the silent treatment. He thought it was a punishment but I preferred it and told him so. Needless to say he did not last long. Anyyywayyy, that aside I hate to think that anyone would want to hurt you through poetry or by any means. Best let someone like that go...preferably out the door of an airplane.
Another fab write from you 👏👏👏👏 x
I seriously hope you will always stand firmly in my corner my friend .. bless ya and thank you no end ..
Neville :) x
We store many things behind our eyes. I liked this take on it. I sensed a feeling of watching another try and be controlling, yet they are unaware of how observant you are being towards them.
Ain't no flies on you Neville (that's an old saying) and I felt it in this write
Gwen :) x
That'll do nicely Gwen, very nicely indeed .................... :) x
I read this to mean an ending...an internal ending where someone can no.longer damage you because everything is now changed. A million complicated emotions written in a few well formed lines...excellent write x
... Ahh' my friend .. it seems you can see write through me .. I am blinded by your insight ................................ Bless ya n truly .. Neville :) x