Poem -
SOUL
As she lays there unaware of the worldÂ
Her soul starts floating to the heavensÂ
Not a care for the world because it had disappointed her countless timesÂ
Yet she tried holding on, Not to the planet but the beings she’s grown to love
As she lays there unaware of the world around her
Her soul continuously floats and her body left behind on this planet for it to devour & leaving behind a place she once called home
Her soul ascends between the night air and she whispers To wind as it softly takes her away; Leaving the beings she’s grown to love in despair.
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Comments
Hi Ann, this is a very thought provoking poem, although it expresses the tragedy in the ultimate moment of loneliness it has an ethereal beauty to it. A very powerful write indeed. Thank you!
Thank you so much I really appreciate your insight.
i try now but fail to call up words now beyond, "i like this, it makes me think, to feel, and to say, "well done".
Beautiful photo too could be a lot of places but as the beach faces south, reminds me of the beach south of the Rincon, La Conchita, or maybe venice, santa monica?
Thank you .. the photo resonated with me because when I look at it, it makes me feel free.Â