Southern Style Butter Biscuits

i need urr advice and critism!

Chasing the harmony
within the synergy
I just wanna feel you insight

Cause you bring in the light
you tease me with your melodies

Ooohh yesss X3
Shine, shine so bright

When im with you the stress fades away
worries or cares
no longer reach

The fears are hidden deep inside the crashing waves
can this just stay the same

I crave you day n night
I feel I could overdose just right tonight

Im don’t feel no suffocation
I can breathe a smile

Your presence so breathtaking
with grace i want your taste

Lets lay beneath the trees as Adam and Eve
Shameless in spring

Act as children so intriguing
That’s how life so post be

simple
Just you meX3