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Space and Creation

Space and Creation

The vastness of space and creation
    Multiplies my every thought
       As I look beyond and imagine
           In awe and wonder
               Of the beauty that exists
                  And beholds me
                     As I walk the earth
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Instagram: Pratibha Poetry Art
Author of Tangles + Knots

 

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John Prophet

Yup, pretty mind bending.  Nice work here. 😃👍🏼

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Pratibha Savani

Thanks John. Appreciate the comment and support. Px 🌠

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Greg Etsell

wonderful poem 
every night i 
go out and look 
at the moon 
and stars 
not just one
that i do this i 
go out 3-4 time 
and just walk
around and 
look up and watch
i love it

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Pratibha Savani

Aaahh Greg isnt it just amazing to look up at the starry night?! If you can see stars. We dont as much in the city but it's so beautiful when we can. Thanks for the pin! 🌠

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Greg Etsell

yes it  is i love 
going out an look at
star maybe to night

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Sarfraz Ahmed

Pratibha,
At her best!
A short beautiful piece that leaves you with wonderment and joy!
Thanks for sharing!
Sarfraz xx

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Pratibha Savani

Thank you Sarf. Appreciate the comment mate. A starry night is amazing to see and wonder. Px🌠

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al Bikaadi

I love poems that have shape. Really dig both the words and how you've presented them. 🙂

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Pratibha Savani

Thank you so much al. That means alot. It means its created an impact and I arranged it well 😄 thanks mate Px🌠

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Bradford

Wonderful, merry Christmas 🎁 to you, rock 

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Shaun Cronick

Star light, star bright all shine in your uplifting celestial poem.
A world of wonder we all live in and so well expressed in your captivating poem Pratibha.
Thanks for sharing and enjoy life and all the wondrous things it can happily bestow.

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Pratibha Savani

Hi Shaun. Thank you for the lovely comments. I find the universe a marvel and it's one of my favourite topics to write about!! Px

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Being Me

Looking up at the stars and wondering about them is what I often do of a night time. The universe fascinates me. Great poem x

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Pratibha Savani

Thank you Tina. I love this short one. I find short poems are the best. Prefer to keep my writes not too long. The universe is full of wonder and just wanted to capture something in a write. Glad you felt the same. Apprectiare you reading. Px

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Gwendoline

This reminds me of all the times I have gazed at the stars. I use to have a telescope. It’s at my mums now, purely because she lives high up in the middle of nowhere, with little to no light pollution. When I sit in her garden, I am always in awe of just how many stars there are. You can even see the Milky Way 🤩 

Beautiful nod towards all us stargazing lovers 
Gwen 💛

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Pratibha Savani

Aaaww thank you Gwen. I love the universe, stars and cosmo. I never had a telescope but always wanted to have one to look into. But yes defo need it where the night is clear to see. Anyway science and universe will always be one of my favourite topics!! Thank you so much for reading back and your lovely comments and pin! Pxxx

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