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Spiritual garden

Spiritual garden

I see unique and beauty

It’s like haven in sight

Everything so free so light

If I can then I just might

Take my hands and hold it tight

This magical myth

Is becoming clear through the mist

You are hear you are dear,Truly sincere

This is my very own spiritual garden

If you do not believe then I beg your pardon

With the touch of havens in brace

At times when I see you face

Going deeper into my soul

This place makes me whole

The whispers I hear

Are valued and dear

Bear foot on this path

My comfortable journey will last

Trying to understand the power this commands

The beauty of this land will forever stand at my feet

Every quest I long to meet

Ill treasure in a heart beat

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Clo Smillie

thank you William there is such a huge spiritual part to myself and it seems to flow out pretty easy.  again your kind words have show i have accomplished the message i wanted all to see.

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Sayed Thangal

As williamsji said ,this poem reflects the inner beauty of spirits, and the success of humanity through spirituality, goop poem, I like this kind of poetry.

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Jimmy Arnold

A poem not only glamourfied in your splendid words of choice but it speaks of enchantment from your heart as well and with this deep spiritual desire, your garden will be forever tended and delightfully grow, creating all things wonderfully possible..Very pretty poem and upbeat attitude to boast of your green thumb attributes.

Good Job as always Clo,

Jimmy

P.S.

William's quotes has a way of placing the spice of life on all he has commented on

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Clo Smillie

Wow thank you guys honestly all your kind words mean alot. Thank you

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Elaine Christie

Hi just a couple of spelling mistakes such as 'You are here' and 'With the touch of haven's embrace'  Lovely poem well done!

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Shirley Pourbaba

Dear Clo,

Lovely poem, i enjoyed my walk in your beautiful and serene garden, and i believe it is for our daily walk in such garden that will be delivered to us our daily dose of miracles for our eyes to see and our hearts to feel.

The beauty of this land will forever stand at my feet

Every quest I long to meet

Ill treasure in a heart beat

Best regards 

Shirley

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Clo Smillie

Thank you so much for a beautiful comment Shirley truly ment alot. Its a beautiful garden that welcomes all

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Clo Smillie

Very pleased with this one , its vaule is so dear to me thank you for all your comments

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