SPLENDOUROUS SPRING
Arrives the splendorous spring.
Awaited by the frigid earth ,
impregnated with the seeds
of tomorrow , aspiring to
stretch the shoots out .
Sun is the happiest to
welcome his beloved.
Together they spawn
a new love story , nature
witnessing their coupling,
bringing the warmth all over.
Birds busy chirping around
singing tales of vernal love.
While working hard ,to build
the new aerie , hatchlings
imminent to arrive, to prove
the carnal prophesies of yore.
Bees buzzing hastily near and far,
glean the first nectar of blossoms.
Blooming after the long freeze.
Verdant regalia on the terrain,
beauty of freshness in the eyes.
Awakening deep sleep of laziness.
Still adamant chill of yesterday
refusing to vanish, tormenting me over.
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Comments
Elegant Write, Good image Thanks for sharing
WILLIAMSJI
Thnxxx William, for your kind review .
Piusha Singh,
Arrives the splendorous spring. ( Spring has definitely arrived with much fascinations for us )
Awaited by the frigid earth, ( The usage is very appropriate, Frigid Earth )
impregnated with the seeds ( The expression is very poetic in its narration )
of tomorrow, aspiring to ( Tomorrow will always bring an aspiration )
stretch the shoots out. ( The season blossoms )
Reading between the lines: One of the first thing, I observe in your verse is that you are trying to bring the beauty of nature into a romantic mood which is an excellent approach. In any discussion of literature or poetry, either romantic or otherwise, it is the nature, which cannot be simply being taken for granted. That is, there is no massive, clearly defined entity for nature to which we can request. Nature is a human inspiration, with a long and intricate cultural background which has led different human beings to conceive of the natural world in very different ways, depending on their varying social and cultural instincts. With this understanding, it is not nearly enough to declare that something is natural and assume that this will end all discussion of what is to be done. What counts for us is nature, and its prime beauty with all the rich allusion and emotional influence that the term can carry, depends very much on your own poetic observation in writing romantic verses, which I should say is clearly available in your scribbling in full swing.
My Congrats, My Vote, My nomination
Regards & Love
WILLIAMSJI MAVELI
Oohthnxxx William for your great remarks and whatever you tried to explain I think you have nailed it.And thnxxx again for the nomination and vote as well.You are really a light guiding all of us in this cosmos.And I'm glad to know that you liked it.
Piusha Singh,
Like the Tribute Poem " Cherie Poetree " My next tribute poem is being focused on your writings, hence be ready to post your best one, so that the next tribute will be titled as " Piusha blossoms "
Regards
WILLIAMSJI MAVELI
Thnxxx William for your kindness.Cherie is a master while I 'm just a foetus in poetry.And getting tribute means I will feel embarrassed .You told that it self is a great honour for me friend.It's not required ,just be my friend that will do.
Pisuha Singh,
Let us wait and see, this is to spread the awareness and significance of writing poetry in COSMOFUNNEL. Moreover, I want all author's to feel more enthusiastic, loyal and vigor towards their own writings, instead of just scribbling something, Regards & Love WILLIAMSJI MAVELI
You are so sweet William.Thnxxx for your love.
Piusha this is beautiful and a pleasure to read, well done 5 from me.
regards Mark x
Thnxxx dear Marks for your kindness and support.
Cheers
OOPs sorry Mark for adding an extra " s".And glad to know ,you liked it.
A really lovely write Puisha, well done
Maddison
Thnxxx Maddison for your kind review.
Congrats on your winning nomination dear Piusha ,
Regards & Love
WILLIAMSJI MAVELI